The instructions are:
Go to page 7 or 77 in your current manuscript
Go to line 7
Post on your blog the next 7 lines, or sentences, as they are – no cheating
Tag 7 other authors to do the same
Was I dreaming? I felt again the stubble of an unshaven face brush my cheek and then the pressure of a mouth over mine. My lungs expanded under the force of a breath from alien lungs. My stomach twisted, I rolled on my side and retched a spume of salt water onto the beach. I coughed and sucked at the chill night air. A hand rubbed my back, another grasped my forearm, tried to control my shaking body. A man’s rough voice in my ear.
“I knew you’d make it. That was the seventh breath I put in you. Seven’s a lucky number...thank god you’re alive.”
I had made it? I was alive? Then I remembered what had happened. Despair flooded through my heart like a rip-tide. A brace of rabbits lay on the sand a little way off, the moonlight glinting in their dead eyes. They were lucky.
Now over to the next seven! (pleased don't feel obliged, guys - just a bit of fun!)
Trevor Belshaw @tbelshaw
Joanna Cannon @JoannaCannon
Rachel Carter @RachCarter
Kirsty Stanley @kirstyes
Linn B Halton @LinnBHalton
Philip C James @PhilipCJames
Russ King @RussWrites
ooh - I want to know more! Now! A great excerpt, Mandy. Thanks for playing and sharing xxx
ReplyDeleteWow! What a tantalising (and appropriate, given the ref to the seventh breath) excerpt. I definitely want to read more.
ReplyDeleteLike Janet said 'tantalising', I really want to know what she's just made it through and why she's not keen on getting there! Lovely writing Mandy.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the thumbs up everyone! I'd better get on and finish it now.
ReplyDeleteWhat a brill extract - and even suits the theme! I was actually about to tag you - but I am clearly too late. Good luck with the WIP.
ReplyDeleteAliB